I am currently trying to write a song called "Just the Way He Smiles". I will post the lyrics on this post. Please comment and tell me if you think they are good or not.
When we're laughin' on the phone,
Or talkin' all alone,
There's somethin' about him that makes me smile.
And when we're walking down the street,
Or talking while we eat,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me laugh.
And when he walks towards me,
Acting as nice as can be,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me smile.
Chorus
And it's just the way he laughs
Oh, just the way he laughs
It's just the way he laughs that makes me smile.
And it's just the way he smiles
Yes, it's just the way he smiles
It's just the way he smiles that makes me laugh.
When we're walkin' down the beach,
Or when he gets me something I can't reach,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me smile.
And when we're holdin' hands,
Or listenin' to our favorite bands,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me laugh.
And when he's hugging me,
I feel so free,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me smile.
Chorus
And when he hugs me,
I feel so free.
And if I fall, he'll catch me.
When he sees me, he says
"There's my baby,"
I love the way he makes me smile.
When he's acting really nice,
I know it's not a sacrafice,
There's just somethin' about him that makes me smile.
I would really appreciate it if all you guys would post a comment on whether or not you like the lyrics. It would really help me. Thanks everyone!! =)
2 comments:
It's about your dad, right?
I love it. My only comment is that I would not repeat words at the end of each line in the chorus.
ya.... sure dad.... lol =) thanks for the suggestion =)
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